Wednesday, 28 March 2018
My embarrassing moment story
Embarrassed moment story.
In the incredible Embarrassing afternoon last Sunday, when me, my brother and Anica were playing, my friend Taylor decided to played with us. We wanted to play hide and seek. As we played we hid in Anica’s garage. We kept hiding from him for a long time in the garage. Suddenly when Taylor went to his humongous gigantic beautiful house and get his something, my brother opened the door of Anica garage. Suddenly I peed on my pants and started to freeze like a mannequin. Then my brother said to go outside, he looked at me and laugh so did Anica. It was near to the entrance my brother sneakily went inside of our house. He told to my dad that I peed on my pants so my dad told me to clean up my jendels with water then wet my pants.
Suddenly my dad grabbed my towel from my room. When I sprinted into the house I closed the door and ran to the bathroom to take a shower. After I took a bath I ran to the hallway and quickly went inside of my room then change my clothes super duper quickly as fast as flash. When I went outside they kept laughing suddenly as Taylor arrived at our house again then Ainca and my brother finally stopped laughing. But then my brother and Anica told what happened to me when we were hiding from him.
I felt so embarrassed that I wouldn’t pee on my pants again and hide from Taylor in Anica’s garage.
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Hello Shadrach,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lars and I'm from HHS. I really like how you use adjective in your writing but some sentence in your writing is not make sense. Also maybe you can change the hid to him, But anyway you did good in your writing.